The Official Writing Challenge
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06/06/05
I was waiting for Jesus to take the keys! Nice story.
06/06/05
This was fun. It would have been almost better without tacking on Mary seeing Jesus at the end and keeping the entire story in h**l.
06/08/05
I like the way this is poised and the dramatic effect.
06/09/05
I enjoyed seeing the exchange between Christ and Satan. Good characterizations.
06/11/05
Yes! I so wanted to shout Yes! when Jesus put his foot on Satan's neck and took from him the keys to death and Hell. Well done. I almost contemplated a story from this perspective but kinda knew you'd do it. And a lot better than I ever could. Introductin of Mary didn't quite jell. You might want to play with the ending. Nevertheless a great story.