The Official Writing Challenge
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Your curious title got me, your characters won me and your ending was sweet. Keep writing!
04/10/08
A sad and touching ending. I liked the picture you painted of this couple at both ages.
04/10/08
Oooh, this was sweet! And so nice. I liked the way you showed how age hadn't really 'affected' anything. This was great, nice writing! ^_^
04/13/08
Needed a kleenex at the end. Moving. You also did a great job of taking me to the scene and helping me know the characters. Well done.
I enjoyed the passage of time in the story and great details.
04/14/08
I kept wondering where the "grandparent" would come in, and then I had to gulp down a stone in my throat!
That was so lovely. Well done!
I'm with Jan. Well done.
04/16/08
Oh, this is so sweet. I loved the memories--just beautiful. Nice job with the topic.
04/16/08
Wonderful characters and description -- it reads like a movie.