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04/10/08
I could almost feel, taste, see and smell these memories. Great descriptions throughout, and a very touching tribute.
04/10/08
What a beautiful story! I really liked this and I especially liked your title. This made me sad and happy and everything-great job with the emotions here, I think you nailed the topic! ^_^
04/11/08
This sweet story came alive for me through your wonderful descriptions. I could hear the squeeky swing, and smell the musty old house. What a blessing to have a grandmother such as this. Good job and great story.
04/11/08
I really enjoyed this. You had some great descriptions - and I really loved the smell of Grandma's porch. The only thing that threw me was the metal screeching which I assumed was maybe the swing - but it just distracted from the flow of the story I thought.
You've created a wonderful sense of atmosphere in this story. Love the title, too.
04/12/08
Simply lovely, thank you.