The Official Writing Challenge
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04/10/08
Very well written. Some wonderful 'little drops' of wisdom and revelation in this piece!
Love how you wove the title idea throughout the piece, especailly when he fell. I smiled. What we don't know about our heritage until we are adults, do you suppose God does it this way so we remember? Thanks for sharing.
04/10/08
What an awesome story. Loved the last paragraph...
04/11/08
Your beginning is great. I liked the tie-in with Danny Tatum. If this is true, I'm glad you finally got some good memories, shared from others, of your grandfather. This is very well written. Your writing is definitely memorable.
04/13/08
I really enjoyed your story. Well written. Like your style.
04/17/08
Congratulations on your Highly Commended. It is well deserved. I loved your tight writing and the use of "drops" throughout the story to tie the different vignettes together. Very nicely done - an enjoyable read.
04/17/08
Congratulations on your Highly Commended. This is really good. You are a very good storyteller. Nice job with the topic.
04/18/08
Congratulations on your highly commended - and your 14th overall. Great work!