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The dialogue gave me the goose bumps (in a good way), especially the last line--captivating!
Fascinating and engaging.
Really interesting concept and great perspective. I enjoyed this.
This is wonderfully creative and interesting. I was spell bound and fasicnated by it. I had a tad bit of trouble keeping the two characters straight, but that wass probably just me. Congrats on very unique entry.
Yes, the big picture will surely be revealed to us all when we get to Heaven. Regrets and missed opportunities will also be revealed; if not for grace, we would not be able to stand seeing our failures in such a way. Your characters are well developed and the heart of the grandmother-flawed and all-is richly described. Very unique perspective.
Interesting perspective. You managed a wonderfully creative angle for this topic, and you did it so well.
What a marvelous, creative idea! I'm stunned!

If you'd had more words, I think a few attributions would have helped me to follow the conversation a bit more easily.

But really, really creative. I've never read anything quite like it. Perfect!
A very reflective, if not revealling piece. I wanted to stay and glimpse (eavesdrop) just a bit more, to learn more.