The Official Writing Challenge
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Very well written. I especially liked the ending.
Ah ha! I didn't suspect the end until you saw Grandpa. Loved this dig!
Your ending is great! (and your title in light of your ending! :) ) I really like that your MC was greeted in heaven by those he knew on earth. I'd never considered it in just that way. This definitely makes me think. :) Wonderful writing with this!
A sensational punch line. Very well done.
Your ending takes the cake! This has to be one of my favorites so far this week (and I have read a lot of entries this week).

We have to be careful not to become so self righteous that we start thinking that only we deserve to go to Heaven. There will be many there that we did not expect, and sadly, some won't be there that we thought would make it.

This one goes on my favorites list. Thank you for sharing. :)