The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/08
You got me! I thought this was about slaves on a plantation until the end. :)Very cleverly done.
03/14/08
Wow! What a cool story! I love this POV. Great job. I am so glad I got to read this.
Laury
Very well written. I was wondering who they were, but didn't figure it out ahead of time. Nice job.
You did a good job of presnting mystery of who your workers and the master was were.
oops were not was/were!
03/16/08
I like the last line, especially "with an entirely different agenda." Clever take on the topic. How fitting that he is going toward a high school. As a public school educator, I definitely think schools are spiritual battlegrounds. Good read.
Wonderful read!What a good script for a play this would make if you wanted to continue the story! Very enjoyable.