The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/08
Very creative, and beautiful detail in your story.
03/13/08
You portrayed a child's fears very well. I can remember having nightmares after watching a forbidden scary movie.
Good use of the italics to show her thoughts.
Very creative use of a scary movie and the surprise that the MC is a child.
03/16/08
What a neat twist when we find out who the MC is, and why she is frightened. Very creative and entertaining piece.
03/16/08
I loved this...well done.
Suspenseful? YES! I still feel like that sometimes as an adult. But I don't hide under the bed.Your descriptions and tone used in the writing was very good! Enjoyed it!