The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/08
You drew me right in with the boyhood remembrance and I could see and hear the Mom calling. Great transition to the reality of adult life and an excellent application of the topic. A strong ending and admonition for us all!
03/14/08
I enjoyed the nostalgic memories
03/15/08
Perfect for this proverb, and leaves a good message for the reader. I enjoyed the read and the brevity was a blessing after reading so many long, boring stories that put me to sleep. Very well written with excellent thoughts! Nice Job!
Creative, engaging, and convicting.
03/16/08
I really liked how you combined 'burning daylight' with the truth that Jesus IS coming soon. Great example of the topic and great lesson.