The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/08
Aw. I loved it all--loved the writing, the story, the supernatural element to it...everything.
03/15/08
Sweet powerful story... great ending and right on topic!
03/15/08
Oooh - I KNOW who wrote this! :D (and, by the way, I gasped with delight when I figured it out) Absolutely magical and sweet, with wonderful characterization. Delightful.
I loved the story, too. I'm so glad he got a second chance when he had failed to make hay when he first had the opportunity. Great storytelling.
Very satisfying story with a perfect ending. Loved the air of mystery. Well done!
03/18/08
Great story, great writing, and I love the ending.
03/18/08
This Time-Ask, I thought it meant ask God something but it meant ask her--or both :0)

Not everyone gets a second chance. We must act while it is still called today. But I'm glad Henry got a second chance. Good story!
Unique take on the topic, loved it! Great ending, too.
03/19/08
GREAT STORY AND NICE WRITING.
Very creative and thought provoking as well as being well-told. I liked the "supernatural" element and think it helped to make the message clear in a way some other techinque might not have.
He better!!!

This was well done and engaging from beginning to the end, loved Max.
03/19/08
Oh I have to chuckle at the ending here. Very well done! He'd better ask her, after all it's the second time around and if he doesn't after this time, well,-lol! This was good, I liked the character of Max best of all. Great job! ^_^
12/11/08
I love our Father's Angels.