The Official Writing Challenge
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Ok, I want to know why there was silence after the snap. (I get the snap, though! LoL) Definitely demonstrates the topic, and gave me a few chuckles, too. :) Oh, my. I just saw the title. Please tell me he wasn't DIVIDED!!
Got it. MOUSE divided...not cat divided. LoL. (ROFL)
I love kitty stories, and especially ones that show what we've always suspected--that cats are masters of manipulation and rulers of their households. This is delightful.
I was enjoying this so much and then wham that darn 750 word limit. This would make a great shoert story. Cute-pointed title too! Keep up the good words.
I love it! Too true. LOL
Charming! You have captured so well that feline attitude. Very well done!
after having owned more than 12 cats myself, you understand the feline mind PURRR-fectly! This story is a WINNER!
What a wonderful POV! As a cat servant (no, I don't own Napoleon) I can relate to this. Your title is... well, I was going to say divine, but cutting would probably be a better word. Loved this story. Well done Holly1
Oh, this was so great, and you described the mind of a cat so well. 3 thumbs up!
Poor kitty, Harry needs to be locked in the pantry all night! I thought the cat got snapped at he end until I read the other comments!
Aww, poor Harry! I loved him, and I really wanted to whack Austin or something, he was such a meanie! Grrr, at least they got the mouse though. Nice job! I really liked the thread of humor suspended throughout here. That was really great! ^_^
Being an animal lover, I loved this story, though I did feel sorry for the mouse. This is very well written, and I enjoyed the point of view. Your talent shines.