The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 695 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
03/14/08
I like this! There's great wisdom here to be followed. I especially Love the last two lines. :)
03/14/08
My heart is singing now, thank you!!!
03/14/08
This vivid imagery and unusual meter are an interesting way to meet the challenge this week.
03/15/08
Perfect poetry with ultra-sound...of rhythym and rhyme. Very, very good!
03/16/08
Wonderful! I love the 11, 10, 11, 10 metrical scheme, and the superb message of exhortation.
03/16/08
Wonderful thoughts in a lovely form. Thank you.
03/16/08
Just lovely - thank you!
03/16/08
Perfect flow and a really good point to your entry.
03/17/08
So righ ton for topic, loved this stanza
"Perhaps there’ll be a timely situation
An occasion rarely offered, scarcely seen,
That could yield the precious fruit so dearly hoped for,
Reveal the blessing ready to be gleaned.

The end is wonderful as well.
03/19/08
This is good! I really liked the flow of it and how it tied in with a challenge that perhaps we can all take, right? Great job here! I liked the last verse best of all! ^_^
03/20/08
This is an excellent poem. I love how you continued your thought forward all the way through. The words and the message are both beautiful.