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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Illustrate the meaning of "Make Hay While the Sun Shines" (without using the actual phrase or literal example). (03/06/08)

TITLE: Seize Each Day
By Ruth Neilson
03/11/08


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Darrell’s arms scoped her out of bed in their morning routine and he carefully carried her over to her metal prison. Katrina’s blue eyes flashed open as metal melded with her flesh, allowing mobility to enter her life again. She grimaced and readjusted her position before wheeling herself over to her dresser to begin the process of preparing for her long day.

“Nervous?” Darrell whispered, brushing a kiss on her cheek.
A tittering laughter filled the air before Katrina answered. “Just slightly, I never thought that I’d be the one to be doing this.”

He grinned, his dark brown eyes twinkling in the bedroom light, but stepped away to prepare for his own day.

Katrina quietly got dressed and then found herself gazing into the mirror. No one in high school would recognize her now. She had gone from an outgoing, popular teenager to a withdrawn girl who wouldn’t speak to anyone; all because of a car accident her senior year. It was the accident that had landed her in the wheelchair for the rest of her life.

The accident had shattered her self-confidence. Three years after officially graduating from high school Katrina found herself wallowing in a cycle of depression and self-pity. Only to be rescued by Darrell Densmith.

That was thirteen years ago.

Darrell had returned to her side. He grinned as he playfully unlocked the wheel and ‘helped’ push her out to their van. Katrina laughed and swatted at him once before allowing Darrell to help her into the van. It was important that she arrived looking dignified today; after all it wasn’t any day that a person would give a speech at her old high school for graduation.

“Help me welcome a woman who not only is an Alumina from Jessie Owens High School, but also has risen above personal tragedy...Dr. Katrina Noë-Densmith …”

Katrina smiled gratefully towards the student body president as another student replaced the tall podium with one she could use. She licked her lips, placed the speech on the podium, and stared out into the crowd.

“Thank you Ms. Summers.” Katrina paused and closed her eyes before laughing once. “Wow, it’s been a long time...” She paused and laughed again as the students in the audience laughed as well. “I had a speech prepared for you and I suddenly realized that it’s not what you, the Class of 2013, need to hear.”

The auditorium grew silent and Katrina could feel everyone’s gaze fixate upon her. “I realized that you don’t need to hear all the clichés of ‘you are great and that you’ll change the world,’ because you know that already.” She paused for a moment then continued. “What you, the Class of 2013, need to hear is to treat each day like it was your last one on this earth.”

“I was in a horrific car accident when I was a month away from walking the line. The car that hit me, the driver walked away but I was up in a coma for a month, and then spent the next three months in the hospital enduring operations to try to repair my back.” Katrina sucked in a deep breath. “I officially graduated with my class; my name was called, but I never got to walk like you will today. To make a long story short, I had gone from a life of independence and movement to one of being a hostage—of my own body. I sank deeper into a depression, until I had a wake up call from the man who is now my husband.”

“Young people hear me! Seize each day as if you have no tomorrow. That was the only way, outside of my faith in God, that I was able to go anywhere in my life. Thank you for your attention and time and best of luck, Class of 2013.”

Katrina slowly took the sheet of paper off the podium, as the silence was shattered by applause. Ms. Summers came up beside Katrina, smiling widely.

“Dr. Noë-Densmith, it would be our honor if you would be the first to walk for our class tonight.” She whispered, settling a cap on Katrina’s head.

Katrina laughed loudly as she nodded. “It would be my honor.”

Dr. Katrina Elizabeth Noë-Densmith.

Katrina rested her hands on the wheels and slowly pushed herself across the stage as the audience began to cheer. Katrina grinned as she shook the final hand and thrust a fist into the air. She was restored.


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Joanne Sher 03/15/08
Very inspirational. It was encouraging to know she had the strength to come back and "walk." Great ending.
Sally Hanan03/15/08
This was a meaningful entry. I don't understand how she was restored at the end when her life seemed to be a good one, but otherwise you did a good job of helping us to see how good her marriage was.
Verna Cole Mitchell 03/16/08
Your story shows the power to love to make one victorious. Not a whole lot of words about her husband, but his character is revealed through the happiness of his wife. Good job.
Shelley Ledfors 03/16/08
A very beautiful, touching story. And so very true. A good reminder for us all. Thanks.
Jan Ackerson 03/17/08
This was very similar, in many ways, to my daughter's story.

I'm not sure I understand her message; "sieze the day because it may be your last" implies that her life is "over". On the other hand, she seems fulfilled. Then again, you imply that she views her wheelchair as a "prison", yet it gives her mobility. So--some mixed messages here, or maybe just clarification needed.

I alway enjoy stories in which the main character has overcome a disability.
K. J. Cash03/18/08
I hope we will all sieze the day! Thanks for the inspiration.
Sara Harricharan 03/20/08
This is very inspiring! (Though I'm sure someone's already mentioned that, lol) I really like how it turned out to be Dr.Katrina and especially her 'speech' those are encouraging words, especially the end where she was able to 'walk' across the stage and pump her fist in the air. It's stories like this that I really love to read to see someone overcome something like this. Great job and great writing. ***Congrats on your EC!***
Loren T. Lowery03/20/08
Ruth, you have done the phrase "carpe diem" much justice and your placment in EC certainly demonstrates that. Congratulations, Loren
Debbie Wistrom03/20/08
Sounds like there is a lot more to her story, like how she got her degree. Congrats on your EC.
Sheri Gordon03/20/08
Congratulations on your EC. This is a very well written story, and an excellent illustration of the topic. Good job.
Catrina Bradley 03/24/08
Congratulations, Ruth! Great story.