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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Illustrate the meaning of "Make Hay While the Sun Shines" (without using the actual phrase or literal example). (03/06/08)

TITLE: Without A Doubt it's HEAVEN
By Dwayne Collins
03/10/08


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Without a doubt, itís HEAVENÖ

When the church was all wiped away from the ground that held the ashes so tight. The bodies of an entire population of seem to fill between the crevices. Body after body was found and when the smoldering smoke was lifted ONE stood over them.

Then one who had created the thought of evil crawled to the feet of HE who stood over the rubbish. They prayed for me and I still led them to their doom. They told me over and over again that my hurt could be replaced by LOVE but I didnít want to hear that. They tried to direct me to once again believe that YOU are my CREATOR and your wrath would soon destroy all that I stood up so erect for but my jealousy and envy for what I believed could not allow me to believe that you held so much power over me. Can you still forgive me?

Then from the ashes all the bodies did raise up. Then the evil one cowarded under the shadows of the righteous. As he gave praise and worshipped the LAMB OF GOD we all watched as the WORD OF GOD came to pass. Away he was taken with all those who stood up for the wickedness and evil doings directed towards mankind. Moaning and groaning for the murders, rapes, molesting of children, sexual immorality, the blaspheming, all those things that made the righteous stray away from their belief in the ALMIGHTY GOD, I AM.

Then I looked up and as I saw what was left of the ashes, I saw not on sign of what was mankind. The darkness was lifted and smiles filled the earth that surrounded me. The horizon was of much more beauty than I had ever imagined. My brothers and sisters, we must show each other LOVE while these weak structures still stand. For when they come down to the ashes let not our souls be taken away to live yet a more extensive pain and that is the pain of knowing we could have been righteous. Because when the end has come and the smiles of peace fill all that was earth, we shall know that without a doubt THIS IS HEAVEN.


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Joanne Sher 03/14/08
i can tell you are very passionate about our Lord. This is a very visual piece. I had a bit of trouble following it in a few places, though. Keep writing!