The Official Writing Challenge
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06/06/05
Good job! I liked it.
06/06/05
Nicely written. Make sure it is all in past tense, you switched at times.
I enjoyed this very much. Good use of imagery for "the tomb was empty, too". Creative and well-written. A blessing to read. Yours in Christ
06/08/05
Absolutely beautiful. This one is a winner in my eyes. The tomb was empty, but this story fills my heart. Thank you.
06/09/05
A very nice family portrait. It's also a reminder that sometimes it's the smallest things (kids and a card) that can just make a day (and life!) better.
Very nice. I enjoyed this sweet story. Great descriptions. I could see the girl with the grass hair. Love the card.
06/11/05
Sweet and delightful story. I could picture those little princesses!
06/11/05
Great writing with a wonderful message. Well done!
Blessings, Lynda