The Official Writing Challenge
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I found your story absolutely delightful with some special lines to remember concerning long-time love and friendship. You can make your stories easier to read here if you'll skip lines between paragraphs.
Even though I knew where it was headed from the time Doris was diagnosed with cancer, I enjoyed the ride.
Even through the deaths, I smiled because you made Clara so likable. Great job with the topic too.