The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/08
This has a good message, but seems to fit last weeks proverb much better than this weeks; and I would suggest tightening up the story a bit to make it more reader-friendly. (It rambles a bit in my humble estimation); however, the point comes across very well. Good job!
This story is a powerful witness. I like how your title is carried through, and I could see how you were continuing your missionary work, even when you came home. Your truths at the end are excellently stated of the importance of carrying out God's work wherever we are.