The Official Writing Challenge
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03/07/08
"To follow Jesus, there is cost, so small compared with rich reward." Love this... it's a great reminder for me right now... great take on topic too.
Such a wonderful ending to this excellent poem--the reminder that we count on Scripture's promises.
03/10/08
Great title. First word to last, it all ties together!
03/10/08
Beautiful from the first word to the last, and those last two lines have goose-bumped my arms! Splendid!
03/11/08
Whoa, this is outstanding. That is an amazing and sophisticated rhyme meter, and it was flawless from what I could tell. Fabulous!
Beautifully crafted! Well-chosen words that fit the style perfectly. The message is brilliant and hopeful.
03/12/08
Very good! I get the title twist with the rainbow, right? lol. My only note is your second line was sort of awkward, like it was too long, though maybe it was just me, otherwise, really nice job! I liked it. ^_^
This hit the spot. I would prefer the other name you considered. Keep up the good words.
03/16/08
Holly -- You've chosen the perfect example from the Bible for this topic and written this poem so beautifully. I really like this,
"But only Noah's kin took heed, enduring while the whole world jeered,
Denying doom and any need to board the ark as judgment neared."

I also like your mention of the judgments (trumpets, bowls, etc). Your title is perfect!
03/18/08
I read the last two lines as part of Jan's "Master Class" on Assonance. Then I had to read the whole thing. Beautiful poetry. I like this - especially the last two lines.