The Official Writing Challenge
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03/07/08
You are a master with words! Your descriptions of death in your first paragraph are so graphic and perfect. The image you've created of the Phoenix in your final paragraph is amazing. I really enjoyed all your allusion, pictures and descriptions. I think this is beautifully written.
Very skillfully written. I'm don't know much about the lore of Pheonixes, so I had to go read about them. :-)
Interesting piece! I stumbled a bit when I came to the word "Vanalox." I thought it was some kind of medication at first (LOL)! From that point on I realized I was in another realm.
This was a creative and intriguing read.
03/08/08
Wow! Such great descriptions!! The names through me, but I was captivated enough to not slow down--now they make sense. Super job!