The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/08
A good example of the topic and a good read. You covered a lot of ground in these few words, but didn't leave the reader feeling lost. Well done!
Realistic, but very hopeful. I like it. God bless yoy.
03/11/08
OK, I was thinking 'lawsuit', but I'm glad it ended your way. :-D

Uplifting. Makes me want to cheer at the end. Whoohooo!

03/12/08
I am with Karen...I wanted to find a lawyer for your MC, but I too am glad it ended the way it did. Great job illustrating the topic. Loved it.