The Official Writing Challenge
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You have so clearly expressed the joy of a believer ready to meet her Lord. The hope of Heaven reduces the end of this life to a whispy white cloud.
03/07/08
I love this line.."my aches and pains are also for a purpose---to give me hope and make my heart happy." Very deep thought that can also apply to those of us who aren't yet on our deathbeds but still in pain.
I loved the character you painted so clearly--her spunkiness, her humor, her hope. She seemed so real that I wondered if this is a true story. The little frog was a nice touch.
03/11/08
Absolutely wonderful! I hope this is a true story. It can be used to show those who are just existing, what living life to the full really means. Good job, it wins in my book.