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You have so succinctly captured here the cycle of generations. The theme of steps was very effective.
I have goose bumps! WOW... I LOVE the three steps you wove into the story.
This is a beautifully touching account of a father's love for his daughter through the years.
The "three steps" idea was very creative.
I loved this. You have all the material here for the makings of a great song lyric - called Three Steps of course. I loved how you wrapped it all up at the end - just three steps away. Nicely done!
As a father to daughters, I loved this. Great repetition and use of a title as well as pacing in your story. Great job.