The Official Writing Challenge
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06/06/05
Nice writing! Thank you!
06/08/05
Your story startled me! I had never brought the fall of man [Adam and Eve] into the Easter story in just this way. But if they watched His agony and death from the balconies of heaven, how their disobedience, making calary necessary, must have broken their hearts. Every descendant that entered the world has suffered one way or another because we entered this world in a fallen state. Because the truth is, as you so accurately pointed out, is that there would have been no need for the "second Adam" to die if the "first Adam" had not experienced the fatal wound that sin inflicts.
06/08/05
Passionately written devotional.

06/09/05
Quite well done, I like the thread of "What have we done?" through the piece. Something we all need to think about.
06/09/05
Very well done, the only small thing that caught my eye, was the rhetorical question in the beginning, it was never answered at the end of the essay.
06/09/05
Thought provoking and convicting. Well done.