The Official Writing Challenge
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Your setting feels real to me. I especailly liked how the sliver did it's healing work. Don't think you used all 750 words, I'd like to see this embellished. Keep writing.
03/06/08
This painted such a beautiful picture at the end, and I love the message of hope it left. Wonderful way to express the topic.
03/07/08
love this line..."The sliver had inserted itself because of a prayer answered. New beginnings were coming. "
03/12/08
You have some really descriptive images here. I love the setting and agree that I'd love to read more about it!