The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved the message here. While not a fan of poetry, I did enjoy this very much. One bit of red ink, there is one your that should be you're, third line of third stanza. Keep writing.
03/07/08
I know nothing about poetry, except that I admire those who can write it! LOL! Very passionate poem!
03/07/08
This is a beautiful message of hope that will shine on anyone who reads it. Well done.
03/12/08
I enjoyed this a great deal, more with each line right up to the great ending.