The Official Writing Challenge
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03/07/08
LOL.. what a cool marriage proposal! I bet she says yes!
03/07/08
Wow, you did a great job of building the suspense. I couldn't tell where this was going. LOVE a happy ending, which I'm making my own assumption that there was one... :)
03/09/08
Glad to see another snippet of Nancy's life. :)
03/12/08
Heehee, what a roundabout way for a guy to propose! This was too funny, especially with Manny's insistence about a yacht. That made me laugh at the end. Great job, it's been a long day and I needed the laugh! ^_^
03/12/08
Wonderful! There's nothing here not to love--it's just superb in every way.
Brilliant! I loved the dialogue, the humor, and most of all the ending. One of my favorites this week. :)
03/12/08
What a sweet story...
03/13/08
Love it! More?
I love Manny. You have a great love story here.