The Official Writing Challenge
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It's quite a saga you have here. Perfect pace to the story; I only wish I could read more.
03/07/08
Yeah.. I love a happy ending :-) Quite the twist having him living there in the elevator!
03/07/08
This story grabbed my interest and didn't let it go. What an entertaining read that pulled on my heartstrings at the end. Well done.
03/11/08
Interesting to say the least. I had to read thru twice to really get the flow. Sounds like a movie I recently saw, anyway keep writing.
03/12/08
I liked this story, but it seemed to end too quick. What caught my attention was the jargon: "write off, hop the bus...twigged onto"...
03/13/08
I wanted more here! I wanted to see what else would happen, how the others would reaction to his transformation. You have quite the suspense thriller here and with so much little details that I wanted to know. This is great, you kept me reading all the way through! ^_^