The Official Writing Challenge
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It's quite a saga you have here. Perfect pace to the story; I only wish I could read more.
Yeah.. I love a happy ending :-) Quite the twist having him living there in the elevator!
This story grabbed my interest and didn't let it go. What an entertaining read that pulled on my heartstrings at the end. Well done.
Interesting to say the least. I had to read thru twice to really get the flow. Sounds like a movie I recently saw, anyway keep writing.
I liked this story, but it seemed to end too quick. What caught my attention was the jargon: "write off, hop the bus...twigged onto"...
I wanted more here! I wanted to see what else would happen, how the others would reaction to his transformation. You have quite the suspense thriller here and with so much little details that I wanted to know. This is great, you kept me reading all the way through! ^_^