The Official Writing Challenge
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02/29/08
You have definitely compelled me to examine my actions. This is very well expressed and overflowing with wisdom. This is a brilliant line:
Spoken words are void of power
When inaction is their cousin

I'm going to hang this on my refrigerator AFTER I found out who wrote it so that I can give proper credit to this brilliant nugget of truth.
03/01/08
This is good. Like Laura, I loved that line as well, it just grabs the reader. The end is perfect too, leaves you thinking long after you are done reading!