The Official Writing Challenge
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02/29/08
This moved me to tears. You built up the conflict and emotion so well, tipped it off with the brawl, and then allowed me to gasp a sigh of relief at your ending statement. WOW.
02/29/08
I have no way of knowing how it feels to be in this man's shoes, except through a well-written and beautiful story like this one. Ah. The problems of humanity and need for grace is so evident in this wonderful entry. Great writing.
02/29/08
I feel like you have been there - like "I" have been there. Absolutely excellent.
03/06/08
Congratulations on your 3rd place. The writing is very good--you capture the heart and head of the MC very well. Nice job with the topic.
03/06/08
Congratulations, if this was written to get us to look at ourselves, you got your wish. KEEP WRITING and God bless.
03/06/08
Congratulations on 3rd place in Advanced! EXcellent piece!!!!!
03/06/08
Such a cleverly-done piece of writing. I loved the point of view and it really made me 'feel' his pain. Fantastic! And Congratulations!
03/06/08
Congratulations, Jake! This is a very sobering piece, for sure! Well-deserved win!
Laury