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Wonderful character insight! Thank you!
Good writing of a well-known story with great insight. You may want to read it over again and look for some missing words and check your tenses - I only noticed a couple of words, and they did not detract from your enjoyable version. Good title and a blessing to read. Yours in Christ
It is quite startling to the same title, same character and same theme as I peice I have written. Interesting development of the story.
A nice twist on the story, she boasted not about her healing but that Jesus called her 'daughter'. I really liked that touch. Do edit more carefully, though and 'she figured' jarred for me, I felt it was too modern for this piece.
Although I agree with the comments already made, I feel this is an awesome story. I could feel the emotion in your words. Well done.
This gave me chills. I think I always kind of identified with her becuase of a problem I had in high school with low blood platlets (not the exact problem she may have had, but I could relate).
Wow! What a wonderful descriptive story. Thank you.
Very well done. Wonderful perspective.
Beautiful ... He called her daughter ... and then the link with Him dying for the people that He cared for. Lovely.
Pamela, I can't start describing how I loved this story! Makes me think of myself, Jesus actually calls me His daughter too! And I too can be healed, adn already have been healed of many things. Thank you for this story. I love the perspective. Thanks again! ~Crystal