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06/06/05
Wonderful character insight! Thank you!
Good writing of a well-known story with great insight. You may want to read it over again and look for some missing words and check your tenses - I only noticed a couple of words, and they did not detract from your enjoyable version. Good title and a blessing to read. Yours in Christ
06/07/05
It is quite startling to the same title, same character and same theme as I peice I have written. Interesting development of the story.
06/08/05
A nice twist on the story, she boasted not about her healing but that Jesus called her 'daughter'. I really liked that touch. Do edit more carefully, though and 'she figured' jarred for me, I felt it was too modern for this piece.
Although I agree with the comments already made, I feel this is an awesome story. I could feel the emotion in your words. Well done.
06/09/05
This gave me chills. I think I always kind of identified with her becuase of a problem I had in high school with low blood platlets (not the exact problem she may have had, but I could relate).
06/09/05
Wow! What a wonderful descriptive story. Thank you.
06/09/05
Very well done. Wonderful perspective.
06/10/05
Beautiful ... He called her daughter ... and then the link with Him dying for the people that He cared for. Lovely.
06/27/05
Pamela, I can't start describing how I loved this story! Makes me think of myself, Jesus actually calls me His daughter too! And I too can be healed, adn already have been healed of many things. Thank you for this story. I love the perspective. Thanks again! ~Crystal