The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/08
This kept me intrigued to the end, which by the way, hit the topic home. Neat to see someone acting on their convictions in such a real way, a difficult way. I enjoyed the mystery of the stranger saying that HE saw her and loved her.
An excellent take on the topic. I think what makes this stand out is how Dan's actions not only reinforced his words, but had the price tag of pain attached. Whether it is faith, hope, or love, none of them have meaning until they have cost us something.
Wonderful topic example.
03/03/08
Good take on topic, some areas need a little work. Example, the man was far enough away that he still was in the shadows yet she heard him whisper. If she heard him he wasn't whispering. Just a thought, keep writing.