The Official Writing Challenge
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02/29/08
I'm so glad there was no "I told you so." Nice work.
03/03/08
A good story with realistic characters.
03/04/08
What a great story for the topic. It has a very authentic and realistic feel to it, and I stayed in engaged from beginning to end. Well done.
I loved how you showed who loved your MC by their actions. I was especially drawn to the dad you created who was a silent sort but let her know she was welcome.
03/06/08
Congratulations on your EC. Very good writing, and an awesome modern version of the prodigal son.
03/06/08
This was a different story. I liked the end how her parents just came and eveloped her in love. They didn't have to pore over details or sort out the whole twisted tangle. It was there. She was there. Love was there. End of story. Very well done, congrats on your EC. ^_^
03/06/08
Congratulations! This is a great piece with such a wonderful, loving message.
Beautiful..just beautiful. Illustrates the waiting arms of Jesus for his people.