The Official Writing Challenge
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This is cute! I used to flop around in my aunt's clunky shoes all the time, and I felt so grown-up when I did.

I think I would have enjoyed seeing you end the sentence before you did, or maybe even the sentence before that, leaving the reader wondering what the Mom decided to do, but they may just be me.

Would LOVE to picture this little girl flopping around at church the next day, maybe even wishing she had just worn her own shoes. :)
Great lesson taught by a child.