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02/28/08
This is a very haunting piece. Very... don't know what else to say.
Laury
02/28/08
This is incredibly haunting and beautifully crafted. Your alliteration adds so much. We live near many canyons so I really love that you used the dangerous raw beauty of a canyon in this piece. Your description of her death with percussive instruments, then silence is very effective. There is so much emotion in this and I was drawn in. Sad, haunting, yet beautiful.
03/02/08
WONDERFUL free verse, and I love, love, love the alliteration. So well done! This poem is haunting...
03/03/08
Very powerful. Wonderfully done.
03/04/08
Wonderful imagery - I could picture this.