The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/08
I love this. The Lord is truly amazing! The main things to look at are the spellings of certain words. There weren't too many misspelled words, however. Well done.
03/02/08
What a heart-breaking beginning to your story -- especially with the amputation (wow! Does that really happen?) I can’t even begin to imagine the task of caring for 22 babies! Then the Missionary Society had the audacity to criticize… What a beautiful story this is…and definitely “Actions speaking louder than words” … it’s so perfect. Thanks for writing this!
03/02/08
Wonderful title, wonderful true story.

As the other commenters have said, watch misspellings, and eliminate most, if not all, the exclamation points. They are most often used in dialogue, not narrative.

What a marvelous ministry this is...
Wonderful story. God is good.