The Official Writing Challenge
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03/01/08
Really cute story, and I like the voice of this piece. I'd suggest that you start with the second paragraph, as the lesson doesn't have to be given both fore and aft. I like this as a devotional, with the lovely lesson after your witty story.
03/01/08
I really like the thoughts in your first paragraph. From your description, I could just the work trying to get the rocker out of the garage, then the despair to find one arm missing. I could almost imagine the speech he would give his wife (made me smile). I guess we shouldn't be surprised at what happened next... I was right with you, when you found the arm. :) I enjoyed your entry.
03/02/08
I love the thought of God watching this very scene and watching over my life as well. Great message.