The Official Writing Challenge
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02/29/08
You had me fooled right to the end—I knew something was coming but never thought of an ant hill. Great "dialect" and a super story.
03/01/08
Fun story. I love the dialogue!
03/04/08
This must have taken you HOURS getting that dialect down pat. WELL done, and the twist at the end really surprised me. :)