The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/08
This is totally hysterical! And, I think, not unlike some real marriages. What a clever, clever take on this routine! Even though it was so humorous,the point was still well made. Loved it!!
02/29/08
Love it. I could it all being played out. Great message, too, and right on target.
02/29/08
So very clever! Love it.
03/01/08
Hilarious. I liked your take on the "Whose on first?" routine.
03/01/08
Fantastic! This is just wonderful!
03/02/08
Creative, clever and extremely entertaining. You NAILED the topic, and in a masterful way. Well done.
03/02/08
This is just too cute-you NOE WATT HU IMEAN ?!

Keep up the writing it is great! Betty OVerstreet
03/03/08
This would be an awesome skit for a church drama group to perform! The humor was great, and you nailed the topic dead on! Wonderful job!
03/03/08
Clever and fun - Who's on First for Christians. I'll bet you had fun writing this. You just have such a way with puns, lately. Enjoyed this.
03/03/08
yes, I recognized the play on
Who's on First immediately. Very good wit and the topic was just right for a script like this one!
03/03/08
Hilarious--and I caught the main characters' names, too (Bud and Lou...). This made me grin all over.
03/03/08
That was an absolute hoot! You kept me reading all the way because I wanted to see what would happen next. You have done a masterful job on the topic even though it was a comedy routine. I love it! Super job!
03/03/08
Very very clever. I'm still smiling. Well done.
Pat Guy  
03/03/08
This is a classic! A masterpiece! I hope someone gets a hold of this .. or you share it with church drama groups. It's such a hoot!
03/04/08
A new classic.....
03/05/08
Hee hee! Very clever! I love it!
03/05/08
I've never seen "Who's on First" used so cleverly and effectively for a good lesson. Masterful.
03/05/08
"From the way everybody was laying on their horns, Jesus got a lot of love today."

That line cracked me up! Actually, the whole thing did. Even though a form of this has been done before, you took it and made it your own. Thank you for the laughs. I needed them. :)

03/05/08
Who'd thought this classic could be improved upon? So, funny,so appropriate and oh so true.
03/05/08
What was the name of that church there in Huville?
Ida Noe. LOL!
03/05/08
Well done allusion to a great skit. Powerful message that really brings home the topic. Loved the names.
03/06/08
Way to go on your EC, Karen. I love the original comedy routine (my teenager listens to it over and over, just cracking up), and you did an awesome job rewriting it for this situation.
03/06/08
This will be great acted out! Congrats on the win.