The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a very good story. It's so good, I now have a sympathy headache for your MC. Not really, but you did a great job putting me in the story. I felt for the mom and was touched by the kindess that was shown to her. Great last line. Super job!
02/28/08
Great story and it fits the topic perfectly.
02/29/08
Very nicely written.
02/29/08
Oh, I really empathized with your MC. The descriptions put the reader right with her in her pain and I could feel her relief at receiving the lasagna and each small blessing that came her way. Then the teddy bear incident brought tears to my eyes. That was such a touching act of caring. Your ending sentence, Love is a great pain reliever, is perfect for this. This is such heart-warming writing. Thanks!
03/03/08
Nice story.
I love the message of this story. The teddy bear was the crowning touch.
Sweet story.