The Official Writing Challenge
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02/29/08
I like your repeating first word in several of your stanzas. (I believe that’s called anaphora). Your thoughts are so good, “lost opportunities taken so lightly” “ Satan steals time,”…then your ending thoughts “Life in increments of time given away,” and “lived for others.” Your title is perfect for these. It’s a beautiful thing to see a person doing what you describe.
Enjoyed this poem.
So very well written and beautiful! This really spoke to me, and it's right on target for the topic.