The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/08
Yup! on target for the topic.

Honeyed words aren't much good when you need a real friend.

Well done!
02/28/08
I think I know a Jessica and an Amy. Great writing and I loved the comparison of the two friends. Mother always knows best, doesn't she? Way to go!
02/29/08
Right on. Well done.
02/29/08
Good story. I'm sure many people will relate to this on some level.
03/01/08
I like your story line, beginning and ending with the telephone call. I enjoyed the story vry much--right on topic.
03/03/08
I think at one time or another we all face the choice between a Jessica and an Amy. The story was right on point as far as the topic was concerned and reminded me of the many different relationships we have. Great Job
03/20/08
Loved this true to life story, you did a wonderful job with your characters.
11/19/09
Dear Pam, This is so readable and your message shines through sweetly (without needing to be "obvious") through the genuine characters you created.

I'm sorry I missed this earlier, but glad I found it now to return the favor: thank you so much for your sweet comment on my "Silent Stars" story. I sure do appreciate you!