The Official Writing Challenge
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02/29/08
Ah -- so that explains how Rory had a family even though she wasn’t a mother yet. I enjoyed your surprise ending. It’s interesting how animals seem to know/sense when a weather or natural phenomenon will occur. (which I’m sure you know is attributable to evolution ) :) I could almost see this, “She lived at the water’s edge and most days enjoyed looking at the serene riparian setting.” I like your word choice in that sentence. Thanks for this fun story.

You fooled me! Cute story.
This was a fun take on the topic. You got me, too.