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06/01/05
The first thought that struck me was isn't this what we always do! Struggle with feelings of self-pity frustration and then guilt for feeling that way in the first place. This piece was well written, a unique take on "birthday." Makes me wonder what those final moments will be like. Thanks for sharing Josie's with us.
Blessings, Lynda
Well done! I believed every line. I totally relate to Josie's distraction, self-pity, guilt, trust, repentance (and I'm a young 'un). The ultimate birthday present, to land in the arms of Jesus. Excellent work!
06/03/05
Very well written! Pulled me right in.
06/03/05
Very good - what a Glorious birthday celebtation! Cool!
06/03/05
I love the fact that we get more than earthly birthdays to celebrate our life here. We also will look forward to our very first birthday into eternity! Very nice, heartwarming article.
06/03/05
Very well written. I liked this very much!
06/08/05
Well written, touching story. So true how eighty year olds talk about the older ones. Loved the name Tripod for the cat.