The Official Writing Challenge
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02/29/08
I had to do a double take at your title. After starting the poem I was thinking… yeah, that really makes sense. You have very neat thoughts in this. I like that you related the countenance to “without words may often sting“, “levels of sound”, and “soundless voice“. I really like your message. Your rhyme and meter are very good in this. Very nice work!
This is a message to be held close to our hearts and minds. Thanks for sharing this well thought out entry.
Yes, I love the message here. You are oh so right about our visage speaking volumes!
Good advice in poetic form.
03/02/08
This is very creative and inspired work. It works, and works well!