The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/08
Ha -- served him right! Very good story... perfect for the topic. I really enjoyed the Scottish flavor of this (complete with names). Having lived a good part of my life in farm country I know how valuable the water is. Good work on this!
Very enjoyable read and well written. Good job on topic.
02/21/08
OUch, great ending!
02/24/08
Wonderful job of establishing the setting through the dialect and the other details.
Great job with the topic. I love the poetic justice.