The Official Writing Challenge
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This sounds like it actually happened...hope it didn't. The story held my interest throughout and the last sentence was perfect.
02/22/08
Wow! A chilling story with a powerful ending. What would be a warning to some falls on deaf ears to others. The restraint shown by your MC puts this right on topic. I especially like your ending sentence, "No thanks, we aren't going in the same direction." Your title is perfect. Good writing on this.
02/24/08
Wow, what a kicker! Engrossing throughout, and that last line really clinches it.