The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed the gentle, loving care in the father's heart for his children in this entry.
02/22/08
You leave the reader (and especially parents) with a lot to consider. I like the verse you quote toward the end and your lesson and reminder that we will stand before God some day. Thank you for writing this.
02/24/08
What a tender, precious attitude this narrator has!

I'm not sure what caused the funny formatting--be sure to check the "preview" before you submit.

This is a quietly sweet piece that leaves the reader feeling satisfied.