The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/08
This was incredibly creative and fun! Very nice job!.... my only thought is that the very end of the last paragraph didn't seem to fit with the tone of the rest of the story. Otherwise, this is one of my favorites!
02/21/08
I've always liked a fairy tale. :) I can imagine you had a blast writing this creative entry. I like your ending lesson about them all working together. This was fun!
02/22/08
Very creative! I like your cute title and the personalities you gave the different characters. ^_^
02/24/08
Yep, definitely creative!
02/24/08
Very creative! Great job!
Laury