The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/08
Ouch! I guess that was her final answer. I liked your alliteration with "Dockers and ducked" and the contrast of this, "That’s only part of it.” Daisy Mae’s perfume was Passion. Her words were not." I appreciate your underlying humor here too, with the reasons for not accepting the ring. Nice work on this!
02/22/08
Nothing is more eyecatching than a one word title that typically says it all...with devasting truth! Lol. I liked the reasons she had for saying no, it was very fun!
Love the humor and details in the story, very entertaining. Good job!
02/24/08
You have a unique and very appealing style. I enjoyed this very much!