The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/08
First I must commend you in the name of your MC :). You put us right in the stress of the situation with Beth. The answer to the dilemma was definitely given to her...you created suspense by leaving this open-ended. Very good work on this.
02/22/08
Oooh, I was there with Beth wanting to get April back for seemingly being a hypocrite. Oh well...I guess we'll never know what she does, lol. I like the ending, leaves you guessing a bit..though I would've liked to know what she did.
02/24/08
Oooh, I like the open-ended conclusion...nice touch in a good story.
02/28/08
I love your open-ended conclusion, and I REALLY appreciate the way Beth's roommate pulled out Scripture to reason with her. Hopefully, the Word won out in the end. Great for the topic and an excellent message for believers.